Topic: These days there are a lot of TV channels available to view. Some people think it is good to have a range of options but others argue that it affects the quality of programs. Discuss both sides and give your opinion as well.

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The increase in the number of TV channels has provoked a critical controversy over if

these variety

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is valuable and provide a broad spectrum of chances for people to select, or

this

increase in quantity is

accompaned

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accompanied

with poor content.From my perspective, many of satalite programs and

showes

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shows

now have very low quality, despite the tremendous which is on the surface nowadays. On the one hand, many people

aurge

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argue

that the approach of variety and

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uge number of programs

gives

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those who watch TV the ability to choose freely

bteween

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between

movis

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movies

talkshows

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talk shows

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, news, or even

crtoon

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cartoon

cartoons

. Not only

this

, even in the same category there is

specificialty

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specifically

specificity

, like different types of films' channels, while one is restricted for action, the other is limited to comedy.

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those people stand on the side of variety as the thought that

highten

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heighten

people's intellect by

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the

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uge amount of information about different aspects

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life,

such

as scientific, sports and current world news.

However

, I can see that these ideas are flawed owing to

superfacial

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superficial

as well as directed thoughts they provide, programs'

maneger

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manager

managers

are

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usually aiming to enforce their points of view on the viewer, to attract many observers to his side no matter they offer the truth or not.

For instance

, those who take the side of

governement

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government

and encourage what they do all the time, while others who judge the behaviours of countries' presidents at any stage even at important and critical events that need all the citizens to be one hand. In conclusion, the quality of programs content and to what extent it

match

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the reality is important than how many of them offered to TV watchers.

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277 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.5

Complete response

4.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic: These days there are a lot of TV channels available to view. Some people think it is good to have a range of options but others argue that it affects the quality of programs. Discuss both sides and give your opinion as well.

Fully explain your ideas

Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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