In some countries young people are not only richer, but also safer and healthier than ever before. However, they are often less happy. What do you think are the reasons for this and what can be done to help?

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youngsters are not as happy as they were in the past.

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, their living conditions have improved considerably.

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a young people have more than enough to spend.

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enjoying better health as the Government is accumulating better health care services.

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how to stay healthy.

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contributes to their safety.

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reason for their dissatisfaction is that they are exposed to the global culture and lured by it, but their parents want them to follow the traditional culture, which leaves them unpleased and confused. Earlier, children knew only what their parents and teachers told them and took that as granted and so were happy and contented. Nowadays, they have internet power in their hands with smartphones and computers and they are

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generation than ever in

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history. They can complete everything

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so that what they have is never sufficient.

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era of fierce competition, and parents and instructors have too

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expectations from them.

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, a decade ago only 60%

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marks

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suitable to have an admission in any reputable university or college.

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, today 90% is the cut-off score to study into their dream schools. The solutions are not simple, but the parents and the authorities can take some steps to overcome it

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as children loved by families are more likely to feel content.

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, the onus is on the youth to realise that the ultimate happiness relies

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themselves and try to find happiness in small things of daily life.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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In some countries young people are not only richer, but also safer and healthier than ever before. However, they are often less happy. What do you think are the reasons for this and what can be done to help?

Fully explain your ideas

Nowadays more and more children are being brought up in single-parent families. What are the causes of this? What effects can be seen as a result of this?

In spite of many advances women have made in education and employment, they continue to be at a disadvantage when it comes to pay and promotion. In your view, what should be done to promote equality of opportunity for men and women in the workplace.

Write a letter to your manager to nominate a person for the best employee of the year award. Explain in your letter:  Who this person is  Why you choose him/her  What the characteristics of the good employee are

Describe a career that requires a lot of hard work, but is rewarding in the end. What is the job, and why is it rewarding despite the challenges? Give specific details to support your answer.

News editor decide what to to broadcast on television and what to print in newspaper. What factors do you think influence these dicisions? Do we bacame used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?