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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do you think that the advantages of this outweighs the disadvantages?

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In some nations, the population flow charts indicate that there is a larger number of young adults than older people. The unbalanced portion results in the form of both positive and negative. In my opinion, the advantages of high youngster citizens are brought more than its disadvantages into a country. Human resources from youths are the power of a territory that changes the state into a developed region. In fact, generation X and Y have strengths to empower domestic wealthy with the abilities of creation and modern technology. Doubtlessly, the government which owns the huge powerful youth groups are able to make a rapid growth economy and are able to deal with the weight on the silent generation. Singapore is a good example country, in which a great young resident size, applies the youths’ capacity in development and stands at the top developed nation list in Asia region.
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, the possible undesirable outcomes of mass young adult inhabitants will
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ack of job opportunity. It can make present workable generations be in a challenge of high competition workplaces.
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, that meaningful competition is a matter of fact that upgrades and strengthens the youthful people.
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, the majority of youths in public is the fortune of a nation and benefits on its public and even much more outweigh than unwelcome consequences. In summary, having massive young adults empowers a country. In spite of difficulties of
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 in work due to inadequate job vacancies, the state will benefit from its youths’ skills reinforcement. It can be concluded that the nation achieves
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dvantages of having more
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lderly population whereas disadvantages likely turn into power.
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