Although many people value their public parks, this space could be better used for other purposes such as residential areas for the ever growing population or to develop business and boost economies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

There is an opinion in society that spaces

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occupied by public parks can find more efficient uses

such

as residential blocks or business centres. I firmly disagree with

this

idea. In

this

essay, I plan to explain my way of viewing

this

phenomenon.

Firstly

, the most prominent fact that makes me think opposite to

this

idea is green areas which are crucial for individuals as they give an opportunity to feel closer to nature.

Moreover

, I am convinced that governments should invest in developing

such

places.

For example

, in my city there used to be a lot of abandoned parks that were reorganized later, and now local habitants are grateful to the authorities who did

this

as they can find a place to walk or just to sit under the trees' shadow.

Secondly

, if a country has a deadly hot climate,

such

green islands become vitally required and crucial. No doubt, the more

such

kinds of spaces we have in the neighbourhood, the clearer and oxygenated air we have. Obviously, these territories are the source of fresh air

due to

the huge number of trees and plants.

For instance

, I can remember the case when the park was reconstructed and

then

there was an amusement park built

instead

with various attractions but without greens. It was a completely failed project because no one goes there during the day, but only in the evening.

To conclude

, I wholeheartedly believe that humanity highly needs natural environments, and business

centers

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and living districts can be placed anywhere else.