With all the problems in the world today, spending money on space exploration is a complete waste. The money could be better spent on other causes.

Many developing and developed countries have allocated funds for space research to find the aliens from other galaxies and
also
to know about the planets similar to The Earth. It requires huge money for
this
project.
However
, there are many problems that have been unsolved for several years in underdeveloped countries
such
as Africa, Indonesia, and Ghana. Let we discuss in
this
essay elaborately.
Firstly
, Many nations have shown keen to investigate the new galaxies other than Milky Way galaxy but, its a challenging project and must be required massive funds. For using these funds in another way; helping the poor nations for education, food, Shelter, and Medications. It is significant factors for those people. They anticipate support from other countries.
Conversely
, the world population has been increasing day by day since the 18th century. We spoil the environment by using of plastic materials; damage the Ozone layer of over-production of air pollution; mixing the waste contents into the oceans; destroying the ancient animals; ruin the forests and cut the trees. Certainly, We need the new
planet
to lead a healthy and tranquil life. For
this
reason, we should be allocated the funds but at the same time, we must save our
planet
and our people. In conclusion,As I discussed earlier, We must protect our
planet
.
Otherwise
, we might find a new
planet
for future generations.
Thus
, All the nations have allocated funds to explore the space research; to get prevention from obstacles outside of the
planet
such
as Firestones, Sun explosions, and Eclipses.,
Submitted by Kani Mozhi on

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