Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

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Technology
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in the form of development is very important for human. Because
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it can create
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facility of our
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standard which is not available in other sources. Because of
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, nowadays people find a new way to connect with other people. There are many ways
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affects our relationships, in my opinion
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it is beneficial for ourselves. In today’s increasingly progressing world, human
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more interact with people because of
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nternet. People
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new friends in their region but they are
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connected with foreign people. Internet
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the whole world and makes it like a small village. Now, people from around the world reach each other within seconds.
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, a friend who lives in Bangladesh can easily interact with his international friend through chat and video call. Which is not available in the past.
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because of modern
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that, nowadays, most of the people working outside . But , they are still can communicate with their family very fast.
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makes a positive impact
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our
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now
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it was. Today now, we are more connected with our friends and family. Even, We can share our
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stories with everyone through
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ocial platform.
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, people are very busy these days , but, still
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they have time for all because of
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in people’s lives. No matter what, I think, it is a blessing for all to get touched with each other.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • technology
  • interact
  • relationships
  • connectivity
  • communication
  • online
  • face-to-face
  • friendships
  • romantic relationships
  • family dynamics
  • positive
  • negative
  • development
  • effects
  • formation
  • ease
  • impacts
  • communities
  • connect
  • interaction
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