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Because of the global economy, many goods including what we use as daily basics produced by other countries have to be transported for a long distance. To what extent do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

#economy #goods #basics #countries #distance
Globalization had revolutionised the world in many aspects.
World
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 has become a global village where everything is available everywhere.
However
,
this
 requires the foods or products to be travelled to
far away
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 places before reaching to consumers of other countries and
this
 has positive as well as negative consequences. I shall discuss
this
 in detail in the upcoming paragraphs. To embark with, the benefits of the global economy and trades have been often highlighted and it is true that it is impossible for all countries to be
self sufficient
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. Some nations are better at agriculture, some for industrial production and some for
food
 processing.
Thus
, each nation has different abilities to do well in some specific sectors.
Moreover
, people get to taste
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ariety of fruits and vegetables produced in other countries.
For instance
, kiwi is a fruit of Newzeland which was hardly known anywhere but because of globalization it is found in almost all countries and is very popular.
On the other hand
, there are a few downsides of globalization
such
 as the local culture gets affected as people get more and more attracted by
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imported
food
.
For instance
, in India
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imported
food
 has replaced the traditional Indian
food
 as youngsters prefer foreign cuisines more. Another reason is, the
food
 quality gets spoiled when
a
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long distance travel
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long distance
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 travel of
food
 is done which can be harmful
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 the individual consuming them.
In addition
, a lot of preservatives are used to save
food
 from spoiling that can be hazardous for all. Laconically, as we have seen, the advantages of making the world a global village can outweigh the disadvantages of it. No matter, how it impacts the
food
 quality a little bit or how it impacts the culture or
food
 habits of individuals, yet it provides a chance to all nations to share and taste a variety found in their country.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Global economy
  • Consumer choice
  • Economic benefits
  • Job creation
  • Gross Domestic Product (GDP)
  • Infrastructure
  • Standard of living
  • Cost efficiencies
  • Raw materials
  • Production processes
  • Specialization
  • Environmental impact
  • Carbon emissions
  • Pollution
  • Supply chain disruptions
  • Local industries
  • Cultural dilution
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