Today people are living in a throwaway society here they use things for a short time only and then throw them away. What are the causes of this and what problems it can lead to?

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The vast majority of society members tend to utilize the goods for a short life span, who afterwards immediately try to get rid of them. Interestingly, the tendency of decreased
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of production and marketing tricks becoming more common day-by-day, seem to be essential reasons for
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problem,
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logically some terrifying consequent issues of those approaches occur frequently in modern society.
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the most important reason for short-term effective products seems to be the decline in
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uality of produced goods.
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, the companies declare that they are aiming to provide
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products, in order to manage the related costs, they mostly prefer raw materials with medium or low
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, which respectively leads to minimized
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standards of produced goods. Another important affecting factor occurs to be the increased rates of marketing tricks, tempting people to buy upgraded products, presenting them as much more
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products with up-to-date features, which interferes the minds of consumers and convince them to purchase the latest versions of,
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, some household equipment,
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devices or other essential products. One of the problems of goods available for a short period of time can be considered their negative impact on the welfare of mid and
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members of society, as it urges them to spend more,
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the expenditure rates of
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of consumers go up.
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, goods which can be useful for a little life span, have a doubled deteriorating effect on
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nvironment by increasing the demand for raw materials in one hand and by a plunged amount of related waste, which culminates in pollution of
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nvironment, eventually. In conclusion,
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there are various causes of short-term efficient products, problems created by them need actions to be taken urgently in
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unanimous agreement. Despite the challenges for helping people to manage their costs effectively, managing bulks of garbages and contributing to the creation of more eco-friendly systems effective solutions for short-term usage of goods abolishing aforementioned negative effects ought to be found.
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