You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Nowadays,
advertisment
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has
h
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uge impact on buyers mind. Few argue that
advertisments
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advertisements

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encourage people to purchase
unneccesory
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unnecessary

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things, while others see it as life-changing move. In
this
essay, I will examine both
side
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and explain why I think that
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this enfluence person
these enfluence people

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enfluence
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influence
influenced

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people to buy unwanted items.
To begin
with, adverts
enfluence
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influence

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our thought process about products because they are very alluring and it seems like they really change things magically as they appeared in short videos and dialogues.
This
is due to technological advancement and their unrealistic impact.
For example
, Fair and Lovely product
shows
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that
b
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lack person can become white in course of two weeks only and many people
traped
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trapped

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in
this
and buy the product which is actually not required. On the other side of
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rgument, many believe that adverts are the main source of
information
after the launch of new products which are very important to know about, which can change
someones
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someone's

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life in
p
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ositive way.
However
,
this
is
govrnment's
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government's

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duty to disseminate the
information
about any important and life-changing products in
m
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arket and people should not rely upon advertising. Vitamine D tablet,
for instance
, should be in the government's important products list and they should inform the public by the department of health and
wefare
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welfare

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ministry.
Thus
, people should not be deprived of getting useful
information
. In conclusion, according to some,
advertisments
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advertisements

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can confluence some people to buy unwanted products,
however
, others think that
dvertisments
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advertisements

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can be
s
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a
the

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ource of useful
information
. I agree with
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irst part of
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rgument and believe that beaurocrats should impose strict law to
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uthenticity of
advertisments
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advertisements

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to save people from being
decieved
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deceived

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