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Some people think that e-books are the death of paper books while others think that paper books will never disappear. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, e-books are in
a
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great demand and it has become a popular trend to read the books on the
internet
 rather purchasing a paper book for reading. In
this
 essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument in detail. Digitalisation is growing fast in the world and access to the
internet
 has
also
 been improved in
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each corner of the world.
Therefore
, access to reading material and books has become easy for people and they can quickly find their favourite author's books on the
internet
 quickly.
Also
, the e-books have more advantages as online platforms give a facility to bookmark the pages so people can start
easly
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easily
early
 where they left, readers can highlight specific lines and
also
 search the difficult words so they can enrich and improve their vocabularies easily. These benefits are attracting more people
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especially youth to read e-books.
However
,
on the other hand
, more 40% of the population is having age more than 60 years and one of the latest surveys
reveiled
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revealed
 that most of the old aged people are falling under technologically challenged category and they are not comfortable to use
internet
 or use digital platforms when it comes to
read
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 the books.
This
 section of the population still prefers to read paper books as it gives them
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comfort to read a physical book.
Also
, some of the old books are not available in the online library resources and only physical copies are available of
such
 books. Looking at these both the sides,
lastly
, in my
openion
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opinion
, I would say that the trend of using paper books will not
be vanished
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 but definitely
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the craze will go down and it will be far more decreased in the near future compared to read the e-books.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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