What are the advantages and disadvantages of Living on campus while student study at University.

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After getting an admission letter from the universities the students tend to have a dilemma whether to have a separate
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out of the university site or live on campus during the education period. Decreased
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for getting the classroom and coming back home, and
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eliminated transport costs can be accepted as
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ain advantages of living on campus,
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, there
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some drawbacks to be taken into consideration.
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, one benefit of living on campus is that the
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needed to commute between the place the student lives and the university can be decreased reasonably. Being
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to the buildings, in which lectures and other lessons are held, creates
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pportunity for spending
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of activities,
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as reading books, having a stroll around the park, talking to your groupmates.
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, living on the campus site is advantageous because it helps students abolish the costs related to
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, whether it is public transport or their own automobiles. Considering the importance of financial resources for students, the preference for living on campus occurs to be the most reasonable choice for most.
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, one problem of living on campus is related to the conditions of dormitories. The equipment, devices and furniture are commonly old ones and the ones being used previously sometimes make people feel irritated while using them, particularly toilets and sanitation centres tend to be the worst parts of them. Another drawback is the decreased rate of freedom for students living there due to the restrictions within dormitories. The most frequently
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claim of students living there is about the rules and regulations applied within the common living spaces. In conclusion, while living on campus can bring about some benefits, it may
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cause disadvantages like feeling under the control all the
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regarding the strict regulatory approach of dormitory executives and provided
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full of old
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used before with low rates of hygiene.
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