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Public libraries will soon no longer be housed in building as all facilites and books are available for all to access. What are the advantages and disadvantages of public libraries existing onlin?

#libraries #facilites #books #access #onlin
Technology has made books available for us to access online and pushed libraries to exist online rather than housed in
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nevitable drawbacks.
Firstly
, now since the libraries join hands with
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nternet, has made their facilities more convenient and accessible to multiple users at
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ingle time which
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 aid to people to enjoy
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ariety of books and materials without the limitation of time upon keep visiting the library for collecting and submitting the books.
Consequently
, they can utilize
this
 time to do their other important tasks or perhaps jot notes online which they can read quickly later on.
However
, considering using libraries online can
also
 impact on people in various ways
for instance
 reading online would not provide the same environment or discipline as they can experience in
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ibrary itself. Along with that using
this
 platform online for longer hours can
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 display some health issues like eye
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, neck and back pain along with deformities in posture.
Moreover
, there are
also
 some privacy concerns in keeping material online which can easily be stolen or misused by anyone even if you keep locked it with
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assword. In summary, it is prominent to have libraries online which can provide us
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various benefits like enjoy numerous books and other reading materials with the easy access of 24 hours. Even though people
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they are more satisfied being online.
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