Many people believe in the idea of school children wearing a school uniform, but should teachers as well be required to conform to a dress code? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

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illage had grown in terms of area as well as infrastructure and transportation facilities.

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nitially very small area was covered by

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illage and it

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two main

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north east

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outh on edge of road and

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pcoming 48 years.

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built

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