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Some think that young people should be free to choose any career they like, while others say that they should think more realistically about their future. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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These days, choosing young people’
future
 careers are a controversial topic among people. Some people argue that teenagers should choose their
future
career
 freely, while others disagree with
this
stating
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 that they should think about their
future
 more realistically. Some may argue that young people should consider more realistically about their
future
 because they can make a
future
 plan. Adolescents should choose their job from objective elements
such
 as salary and unemployment rates so that they would obtain stable incomes for a long-term perspective, which is helpful when they can think about marriage and having children.
For example
, firefighters and doctors, which are highly demanding jobs are likely to continue as their careers, without concerning their financial issues or losing jobs.
However
, I believe that young people should be free to choose any
career
 they like because they can spend fruitful lives. Since they choose their job according to their interests, they have passions for their work.
For instance
, I decided on my
future
career
 as a nurse by myself when I was 13 years old and I am still motivated to
endeavor
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 to achieve my ideal, which is to work in
this
 occupation in foreign countries because
that is
 the one I desire to be even though I faced difficulties.
Thus
, youngsters should choose their
future
 careers by themselves. In conclusion, I believe that young people should be free to choose any
career
 they like because youngsters enjoy their lives in their
favorite
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