Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth rather than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. To What extent do you agree or disagree?

Youngsters are
infulenced
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influenced
by celebrities charm & luxury in the place of accomplishments . I partially agree, with statement
younsters
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youngsters
might be
infulenced
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influenced
with glamour and wealth but
y
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ounger generation
need
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to
concerate
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concentrate
on the performance and
hardwork
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hard work
they have put to achieve it . I will be
higlighting
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highlighting
my points to prove the
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statement.
To begin
with, most of the details about the celebrities properties and
lifestyle
has been discussed in the social media platform which
infulences
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influences
the younger minds. They are very much interested in the way of living and wealth, As the
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filmstar
film star
post
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any photos or videos in the social media younger generations have an impression that celebrities have
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ery lavish
lifestyle
.They
also
send out an example in order to be famous you have to be rich & beautiful rather than talent. Youngsters trying to
imtitate
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imitate
celebs will lead youngers in the wrong path like robbery for money or that can be even a murder.
For instance
, there was a news a
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tried to kill his friend because they had an
aurgement
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argument
agreement
about the clothes worn by
an
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celebrity in the award function. On the other end,
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are celebrities who
infulence
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influence
younger minds based on the performance. where the lavish
lifestyle
doesnt
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doesn't
matter .
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are so many inspirational stories that make the youngsters based on the dedication and
hardwork
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hard work
even
an difficult tasks
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difficult tasks
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can be easily achieved.
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famous badminton player was able to win many titles based on her talent and commitment which inspired many
younsters
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youngsters
they can
also
have their future in sports through hard work & dedication. To
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,
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of celebrities will always create an impact on the teenagers but at the same time understanding the difficulties faced by them to achieve that
lifestyle
will
also
help youngsters to understand it better.
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