You recently went on a trip and thought that the tour guide was particularly helpful. Now you would like to show him/ her your appreciation. Write a letter to the manager of the tour company. In your letter describe the tour explain why you liked the tour guide say what you would like the manager to do to reward the tour guide

Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Jason Mans, on 21st November, I booked a three days trip to Udaipur from your company. We were four people and one of them was from a foreign country. We stayed in
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and hired a private cab for
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. Overall, we had a great experience. I am writing
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guides 'Kashi Chand' who was very helpful throughout the tour. The guide helped us a lot, I candidly remember on the
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stomach ache. There was no medical shop nearby and when I called the guide
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midnight, he
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came to our place with a medicine. The
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best thing was that he thoroughly explained about monuments and historical places in the English language.
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friend delighted as he was able to understand conveniently.
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, I want to thank him for the wonderful service.
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, I would be grateful if you would appreciate him on
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but other employees as well. If possible, you can give a cash reward to stimulate his good deeds. Thank you for your time and consideration. Yours faithfully, Jason Mans
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