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People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?

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Many people attend institute or
college
 after their high school years for several reasons which they choose by themself. I believe that the most common reason why people attend institute or
college
 to have new experiences in life , to prepare for
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development
, and to develop the ability of their personality.
Firstly
, many people attend educational institution or
college
 to have
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 new experience in life. Many students leave their home and move to live by themself when they go to the
cademy
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academy
.
This
 is the
first
 time that they had to make a resolution on their own, without their parents’ help. Making their own decisions will raise the
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ntelligence of themselves.
Moreover
, students
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secondary school can meet different students from different nationalities and religions so students can learn about different culture around the world.
Secondly
, many people go to
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ducational institution or
college
 to prepare for a system.
development
 training is becoming more important nowadays for young people compared to old people. At
college
, students learn many skills for their
development
 and they intern to
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nternship with a lot of chances. All of these things prepare them for their
development
.
Also
, students attend educational institution or
college
 to hike the self-wisdom of their personality in life. They attend for that to gain their learning of subjects which they find interesting.
For example
, many students study science because they are interested in science but they work in the business area. To sum up, I think people should not only focus on
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development
 when they go to the
cademy
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academy
 or
college
. They have to follow to have new experience and intelligence about their personality and the great world around them which they live in.
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