You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter: • Explain why you want to do the voluntary work. • State what your skills and experience are. • Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long. • Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir / Madam

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volunteering in Africa’s developing countries. I was so frustrated about poverty and hunger that have

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to voluntary work and do as much as possible to change the situation for the better. All my life I work as

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matter. Do not hesitate to contact me at [email protected] Thank you in advance for your answer! Faithfully yours, Valentin Bakin

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