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You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter: • Explain why you want to do the voluntary work. • State what your skills and experience are. • Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long. • Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir / Madam

#english #country #work #company #expeditions #trips #skills #volunteer #sir #madam
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in regard to
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 I saw in Natural Geographic magazine relied
to
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 volunteering in Africa’s developing countries. I was so frustrated about poverty and hunger that have
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 to be in
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 century in several countries. The less I can do to change
this
 situation
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 to voluntary work and do as much as possible to change the situation for the better. All my life I work as
manager
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 and my skills can seem inappropriate, but I can compensate
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 lack of experience with
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great enthusiasm and eagerness to make
this
 world better.
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, I had finished
first
 aid courses and have a huge travel experience.
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, I have
Russian
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 proficiency level and French medium language knowledge. I would be grateful if you could offer me volunteering programs somewhere in Central Africa region. The length of
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 has
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 matter to me because I have
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 income from estates, so it could be up to one year. I would appreciate all the guidance and information you can give me in
this
 matter. Do not hesitate to contact me at [email protected] Thank you in advance for your answer! Faithfully yours, Valentin Bakin
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