You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter, explain your situation describe your problems tell him/her when you think you can move in

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
request letter regarding shifting to
new
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rental apartment. My name is Kailash Kamble and I am
student
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of
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your institute
since
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for
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last
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the last
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1 year. College
also
allotted
hostel
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a hostel
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facility to me for 2 years because I had applied it for during
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process. It was
good
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decision to have
hostel
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a hostel
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facility. Since
,
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I need personal
some
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space and time for my final examination preparation I am planning
for
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to
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shift
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to a rental apartment along with my one friend. As per
earlier
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conversation with you by
an
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email
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it
confirmed
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from both
side
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that
next
month
will be my
last
month
in
hostel
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and
per
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I have already finished
formalities
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the formalities
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. Accidently in
last
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week
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I fall down from
staircase
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the staircase
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. After professional medical consulting it is found that there is a crack develop in my knee bone and it is strongly
recommnded
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recommended
complete
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bed rest for a
month
.
Hence
, I have no other option left that does not mean
i
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change my plan but just need
one
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month
extention
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extension
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to handle
this
serious situation. I will complete
extra
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documentaion
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documentation
process if
any
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required
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. Looking
forword
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forward
for reply Your's faithfully, Kailash Kamble
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