You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter, explain your situation describe your problems tell him/her when you think you can move in
Dear Sir,
I am writing I fall down from
this
request letter regarding shifting to new
rental apartment.
My name is Kailash Kamble and I am Add an article
a new
student
Add an article
a student
of
your institute Change preposition
at
since
Change preposition
for
last
1 year. College Correct article usage
the last
also
allotted hostel
facility to me for 2 years because I had applied it for during Correct article usage
a hostel
admission
process. It was Correct article usage
the admission
good
decision to have Correct article usage
a good
hostel
facility. SinceCorrect article usage
a hostel
,
I need personal Remove the comma
apply
some
space and time for my final examination preparation I am planning Correct quantifier usage
apply
for
Change preposition
to
shift
to a rental apartment along with my one friend.
As per Add an article
the shift
a shift
earlier
conversation with you by Correct article usage
an earlier
an
Correct article usage
apply
email
it Add a comma
,email
confirmed
from both Add a missing verb
was confirmed
side
that Fix the agreement mistake
sides
next
month
will be my last
month
in hostel
and Correct article usage
the hostel
per
I have already finished Change preposition
apply
formalities
. Accidently in Correct article usage
the formalities
last
weekCorrect article usage
the last
Add a comma
,
staircase
. After professional medical consulting it is found that there is a crack develop in my knee bone and it is strongly Add an article
the staircase
recommnded
Correct your spelling
recommended
complete
bed rest for a Change preposition
to complete
month
.
Hence
, I have no other option left that does not mean i
change my plan but just need Change the capitalization
I
one
Add a hyphen
one-month
month
extention
to handle Correct your spelling
extension
Extention
this
serious situation. I will complete extra
Correct article usage
the extra
documentaion
process if Correct your spelling
documentation
any
Correct quantifier usage
apply
required
.
Looking Add a missing verb
is required
forword
for reply
Your's faithfully,
Kailash KambleCorrect your spelling
forward
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite