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Young people are much more aware of and concerned about issues like the environment, poverty, and animal welfare than previous generations. What is your own opinion?

#people #environment #poverty #welfare #generations
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outh of today's world are more involved in taking care of these matters than ever before .
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 more aware and taking various steps to resolve these issues .
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outh of today's world are more aware
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 importance of
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tudy . Education is the key to solve most of
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roblems .
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other people in the society about
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tate and that approach
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 by other young people and they start
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