Computer games are played by all children of different nationalities. But parents think that they are not very educational and are harmful. What do you think about.? Give opinions with examples.

It is evident a fact that technology has advanced prevalent in every sector including
computer
games which is increasingly popular among young people. It is often debated that children across the globe playing
computer
games do waste their valuable
time
while parents think that they must utilize that valuable
time
in learning academic lessons and other extra co-curricular activities. As per my viewpoint,
computer
games are useful for learning and developing cognitive skills. To commence with, many young pupils are allured with the high graphical games on the
computer
and often they play in a group at their home.
Computer
games are the new modern way of leisure activity among youth and the trend is enhancing.
Secondly
, students often discuss the strategies and tactics of the games during the break
time
in the school that allows them to develop skills like group discussion and team building.
Similarly
, brainstorming games and strategy games develop several skills in them like decision making, planning, leadership, reflexes, etc.
Moreover
, they can connect with hundreds of people online of the same attitudes and interest through internet games and can build an online world.
In addition
, many students can evoke interest in 3d vision, ethical hacking, graphical animation and so on by playing advance graphical games and can make a suitable career in the long run.
For instance
, many students in my school days were crazy about games, it evokes and enhances curiosity in them by playing certain games and they made a career as an animation and graphical engineer later on.
However
, parents and teachers opine that students should not waste their quality
time
by playing
such
games as it adversely affects them on health and academic studies. Parents
also
believe that children often miss completing their homework as they all the
time
playing
computer
games and become an addiction.
Consequently
, it reduces face to face communication and social activity by not playing various sports.
Also
, as more
time
is devoted in the front of the screen and it impacts the eyes and mental health through the exposure of violence and transforms the nature to aggression at a shorter age. In conclusion, parents and teachers should allow
computer
games to be played during the free
time
but it should be monitor how much
time
and what kind of games children play during their leisure activity.
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