In today's competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents' absence. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
Nowadays, many families have dual sources of
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husbands and wives go out to work, that will be of benefit to their children, while others believe that children will be affected due to lack of parental support. Use synonyms
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situation can affect children Linking Words
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positively and negatively.
Children will gain numerous benefits when Use synonyms
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earners for a number of reasons. Use synonyms
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will amount to a better standard of living. Use synonyms
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earners often attend the best educational environment. Use synonyms
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homes are able to enjoy their life by travelling abroad, going on holidays and affording things they need.
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On the other hand
, some people believe that children are affected and may face some problems due to Linking Words
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kind of family. In fact, most parents are not usually available to their children. The busy workload at workplaces can cause adverse implications to parents’ emotional states and Linking Words
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, when parents are stressed with their work, they decide to ignore their children and let them do what they want, which may lead to an imbalance between the parents and children’s relationship. Children, Linking Words
as a result
, without the care of parents, may get involved in crime easily or be alcoholic.
In conclusion, I believe that we cannot change the fact that parents have to work but if parents make time for their children in the evenings or at the weekends, Linking Words
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and a much higher standard of living, which brings benefits to the whole family.Use synonyms
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