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Many products that we buy are made in other countries. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this and give your own opinion

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Dear Sir, I am Mirza Owais and I am writing
this
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nterview which I gave
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 week for the position of Supply Chain Manager. As you required a person for the managerial position.
Therefore
, the post requires vast experience and qualifications. I have done MBA IN supply chain management along with CSCP Certification.
This
 job required negotiations skills, purchase , inventory management experience and
problem solving
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 skills. Which I have and I gave
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nterview to the General Manager of the company and It was a great and I realized that I am the best candidate for
this
 job because I have huge experience and I am aware the market situation
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 have a lot contacts with suppliers. Now, it has been a week and there is
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eply from your side so I am a little bit curious about your decision. Whereas
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 the G.M told me about his decision but he said final decision H.R will release. I am looking forward to
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you soon. Yours Faithfully, Mirza Owais
Submitted by owais Mirza on

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