Many people living in cities these days do not get enough physical exercise. What are the causes of this?

Nowadays, people who live in an urban city, don't do sports enough. It has several reasons

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technology

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and not having time to do sports because of the job.

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, technology evolves day by day

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and spreads out

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everywhere. New social media applications, new movies, new podcasts appear every day, and cities people easily

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them. So, they may

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to use their mobile phone to surf at the internet

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or look at the social media accounts when they have leisure time

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of going out to walk

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or going to

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ym. Technological changes may affect people to not do physical activities. Today, every

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competition with others, they want to make more profit than other's companies. So, it produces that employees need to work harder

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ffice more hours. Because of their intense jobs, and duties, they may feel exhausted.

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, when employees come to

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ome, they might not have

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nergy to do physical activities. They might just want to rest at their comfortable sofa

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and chitchat with their family.

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, intense jobs may reduce the number of physical activities time. To conclude, improvement of technology

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makes easier our life, but

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has damage

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not sports.

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, having a job is a necessary item in

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dult's daily life,

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if people work harder, they might lose their physical energy.