Money is important in most people’s lives. Although some people think it is more important than others. What do you feel are the right uses of money? What other factors are important for a good life?
Needless to say,
money
has an enormous impact on a lot of people's life
. While money
can give you power and luxury items or it will put your life
on dangerous，which depend on how you use
it. but there have something we still cannot gain by money
.
To commence with, what is the right way to use
the money
in my life
? In my personal opinion, first
I will use
my deposit to improve my knowledge and perfection technical such
as language, community skill and cooking skill . For example
, I have learned English and commercial cooking competence in Australia in order to improve my community competence to build a nice friendship with local people and understand their culture easily and I can operate a cafe with my perfection cooking technical. Secondly
, after enhance my personal ability than I will invest my personal business or other programs such
as , so I can spend my deposit to earn more property. Finally
, when I have enough wealth and property , I will contribute some of my wealth to charities organisation which can assist a lot of disabled people or poverty-stricken area.
However
, no one can argue with the fact that money
is important but not the most important one. Money
is not almighty for everything. Even though we can use
the money
to satisfy our physical items requirement but it not necessarily guarantees happiness for our lives. For instance
, according to apple Taiwan newspaper reported that a 10 years old boy had been kidnapped by the criminal. The purpose of them is trying to gain a million pounds from his parent. Moreover
, the most important thing for me is family and friends, who always concern me and support me whenever I’m sad or happy, that relationship is priceless.
To sum up, money
can improve our life
quality and enhance our skill. however
, family and friends are the most significant factor which supports and assists me to survive in this
world.Submitted by atruru0427 on
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