Write about the following topic: Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?

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The issue of insomnia is becoming more and more common to many people, especially the adults. Yet there are several causes for

this

problem of getting insufficient sleep relating to the noise pollution, stresses at work and perhaps, spoils when infants are crying at midnight.

However

, there are some solutions corresponding to those causes that I would like to propose in the later paragraph. Considering the cause of lack of sleep,

firstly

, it is apparently due to unpleasant sounds from the neighbours,

for example

, controversies happen when we are sleeping may negatively affect our mental health leading to the problem of sleeping. Another reason could be because of the work stress,

in other words

, if we had to work intensively and suffer pressures all day,

this

would make us feel depressed even when going to bed,

therefore

, it results in lack of sleep.

Moreover

, it is said that parents tend to be stressed when nurturing their offspring at night, especially when they have five to six-month babies. Hopefully, there are some feasible solutions to

this

matter.

Firstly

, in terms of the noisy sounds from people living

door, we could gently ask them to be quieter at night or we could call the authority to intervene in the worst-case scenario if our neighbours refused to cooperate.

Secondly

, practising meditation can aid to reduce the pressure of working.

For instance

, taking at least twenty minutes to sit silently, patiently before going to bed can help train our brain to be more resilient.

Lastly

although

infant annoyance is inevitable, parents can shift to take care of their children, the mother looks after their babies in a certain amount of time and

then

changes the duty to her spouse, and vice versa,

hence

, both will have enough time to sleep. In conclusion, even though these causes can make us difficult getting sufficient sleep, I believe the corresponding solutions can solve

this

issue.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

319 words

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Write about the following topic: Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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