Do you think people notice how advertisements influence their decisions?

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Advertisements are part of our daily routine and probably. There are a lot of kinds of advertisements and the most popular are commercials on television.

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you can find ads

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Youtube, big banners in streets and in newspapers.

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ads could influence our decision.

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, we need to be clear that the ads in most cases are made to engage the people to buy something. When you see television commercials they are offering something to buy in general like a car, a house or a clothe.

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customer. These advertisements are made to suggest that you need to buy a determined kind of product or brand. These influences are made through a set of strategies.

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information that captures the customer's attention and influences them even if they didn’t realize it. An example of

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is the commercial of Coca-Cola

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good feelings and in a good situation.

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when you are thirsty probably you will ask

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a Coca-Cola because your mind will try to link Coca-Cola with a good feel. In my opinion, is sure that people are influenced by advertisements because sometimes they buy or consume a suggested product, but not all get noticed that they are being influenced. In my view, it is difficult to identify because sometimes you can think that it is your particular choice about something

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of realizing that it was suggested by an advertisement.

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Topic Vocabulary:

pervasive
subtly
psychological tactics
appealing to emotions
celebrity endorsements
targeted advertisements
algorithms
consumer behavior
brand recognition
loyalty
consumer awareness
skepticism
unbiased information
societal norms
beauty standards
consumerism

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Do you think people notice how advertisements influence their decisions?

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people think the manufacturers and shopping malls should sell fewer packaged products while others argue that people have the responsibility to buy products with less packaging. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.