Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view point ?

Few individual give their opinion that art and
culture
is waste of tax
money
done by goverment .
This
cash can be well spend on building hospital,school,roads and more public sectors than monuments , temples .
This
essay partially agree with the point that monuments and temple creation are waste usage of
money
. Few of society groups thinks that building art and
craft
is unnecessary use of public
money
. As Art and
craft
do not fulfill daily needs of poor in the countries .
This
money
can be well spent on free health care and eduction for people who are below poverty level .There are 1/3 of country who sleeps empty stomach in night and malnutrition .
For example
:- Sardar bhallav patel monument in gujrat has made from near about 300 crore rupee , Which
also
hold record for tallest statue in the world ,
however
there are multiple better options
such
as swach bahart,Girl child available for goverment to invest in . On ther other hand , Art creation provide assurance to preserve our heritage and
culture
which has been follow from 18t century .
This
provide new generation to meet to their ancensestor's
culture
. In absence of
craft
our young generation will never know about the work done by our ancesestors
such
as creation of silk , sword,textile .They will be unaware of history of india which hold 23% GDP of world in 18th century before british rule and
also
was biggest textile exporter in the world.
For example
:- Goverment has lauched many scheme to boost up the textile industry of nasik,lucknow and tamilnadu. They have
also
created many heritage centers and meusems to introduce the sword and weapon used by maharajas in the 18th century. In conclusion ,
This
essay is partially in sync with the view point that tax payers
money
can be used for better investment ,
however
preservation of ansestoral art and
craft
and heriatage of india is
also
important to keep teh
culture
alive in the younger generation.
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