Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and, as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products. What problems do this cause? What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?

Big organisations have huge marketing and promotion budgets which
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them acquire a lot of customers for their products.
This
causes a lot of trouble for local businesses.
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essay is going to present the issues that the local companies face and how could we motivate people to buy from these places. Massive enterprises are able to grab the attention of the public by producing visually appealing advertisements and having them aired on televisions and on the internet with the help of social media influencers. Local organisations with their smaller budgets are not able to do the same which does not allow them to reach a wider audience
subsequently
reducing their sales. Large corporations with more cash in hand are able to push a positive image for their
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mediocre products by hiring audience's favourite celebrities.  Large companies can produce in bulk which allows them to keep the costs of production less and they are
also
able to lock in the manufacturers of their products under a contract and they could use
this
as an unfair advantage against the smaller businesses by barring the manufacturers from working with
such
local companies. The
government
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ecessary steps to avoid the market to be completely overtaken by huge multinational corporate houses. They could run advertisements to educate people on the advantages of buying from
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local businesses.
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would not only help the small companies to sell their products to more people
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would
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be beneficial for the
government
in order to reduce a countries imports which in turn helps in improving the economics of a nation. The recent steps taken by the
government
of India can be taken as an example in which they introduced the "Make in India" and "Vocal for Local" initiatives. The
government
should
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introduce policies to keep a check on the predatory nature of the big companies and stop them from making unfair use of their powers. In my opinion
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being vocal for local products is
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beneficial
for a country as a whole as
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helps generates employment and
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improves the financial stature of a nation at a global level. The governments should come forward and take the necessary steps to educate the citizens about the advantages of buying local products.
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