You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to study/work.

Dear madam, I am writing to let you know that I am unhappy with my current living conditions. While the accommodation itself is fine, my housemate has become intolerable making it almost impossible for me to work.I hope you will consider my situation favourably. Let me explain my situation. The trouble started about three months ago when my housemate
first
moved it. Prior to that, everything was fine; my old roommate was extremely considerate. My present roommate,
however
, stays up almost all night and plays incessantly loud music, As
such
, I have not been able to sleep properly and
therefore
cannot concentrate on my studies. Would you kindly transfer me or my housemate to another room? I would much prefer to live with someone who is quieter and most considerate of others. As long as it is quiet, I don't mind whom I live with. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Nithya
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