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Cooking food is a waste of time in today’s hectic life. Fast food restaurant are helpful in modern living and it is less stressful. Do you agree or disagree.

#food #waste #time #today’s #life #restaurant
Health is wealth - the main source of a healthy person is his nutrition diet, which is absent in fast
food
,
also
 healthy cooking doesn't require hours of time to prepare,unlike junk
food
.
Hence
 I disagree with the given statement. Even though modern life has changed people lifestyle and more importance is given to time rather than any other resource, the major goal of life remains the same to be healthy and happily satisfied. Research shows that people who eat restaurant
food
 prone to face a lot of health issues like obesity, hypertension, stress disorder,
food
 poison,
also
 no one can guarantee the hygiene in hotels.
Moreover
 cooking is an art, more we cook more we will be independent.
Finally
,it is important to take care of health more than anything,
hence
 it is better to cook ourselves rather than eating restaurant
food
.
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