Some think that ambition is a good quality. Is it important to be ambitious? Is it a positive or negative characteristic

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world, being ambitious is considered

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good quality by many societies. In my opinion, it is very important for

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competitive world.

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, it can have its drawbacks like not

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to focus on one particular goal .

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essay will deal with both sides. The important thing in life is to achieve success and to become successful one must have certain goals. Working hard to achieve those goals will ultimately achieve their ambition.

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, they get wealth and status

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and are respected more in society.

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, a student

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with lakhs of other students for the NEET entrance examination to get

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medical seat , in a college of their choice. They take

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gap and solely prepare for

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competitive exam. On achieving the desired score and college of their choice, they are treated like gods in society.

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, too many ambitions can make a person not able to set his priorities straight. He becomes arrogant and

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. They would look down upon others when they are successful.

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, a businessman who is successful in

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a profit

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and becomes

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arrogant and starts to indulge in other businesses with the thought of

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success in that too. He

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starts to overindulge in buying many luxury vehicles, apartments and other properties. When his business starts to fail, he loses everything he achieved. In conclusion, being ambitious is a good and positive characteristic required for

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world but one must be too ambitious.

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coherence cohesion

The introduction lacks clarity and does not effectively outline the main points to be discussed. The conclusion needs to be more substantial and address the main points and arguments presented. Use topic sentences and supporting details to create a logical connection between ideas. Ensure that all examples are relevant to the main points and effectively support the arguments presented.

task achievement

The essay provides a clear response to the task question and presents relevant ideas. However, the ideas presented lack clear development and the examples provided are not entirely relevant. Improve topic development and provide more specific and relevant examples to support the arguments.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

256 words

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