You live near a university and would like to earn some extra money by renting a room in your apartment to a student.

#university #money #room #apartment #student

Dear Sir/ Madam, I would like to inform you that, I have a room available for renting in my

apartment

which is affordable for students who like to save some money. The

apartment

is 2 streets across the university and it comes with lots of facilities for the students. The room is fully furnished and the

apartment

all the amenities which can

also

be used by the tenant. The bathroom is attached and

also

has a deck for viewing the amazing river view of Nile. Just below the

apartment

is stores for daily needs and

also

there is Bus facilities and other commutes to the university. The rent is very affordable for the Student who likes to save some money. Kindly contact me at 222-875-5264 and I look forward to hearing from you on my proposal to rent my room and seeking good students. Sincerely, Berry

Submitted by Siji Anish on Mon Dec 21 2020

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

Paragraph 1 - Introduction

Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Do you want to check your IELTS writing?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

1Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

146 words

<40

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 checks
Get all the feedback you need to keep improving your charts and letters.
Unlimited Task 2 checks
Practice and perfect your skills with essays.
Personalized suggestions
Know how to boost your score.
Detailed mistakes analysis
Get instant feedback. Spot every mistake.
Topic ideas generator
Get topic-specific ideas to enhance your writing.
Vocabulary helper
Get the right words for any topic.
Progress tracking
Track your writing improvements.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

5
band
These days, cell (mobile) phones and the internet are very important to the ways in which people relate to one another socially. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays electronic devices and the Internet play significant roles in our daily life. Many are of the opinion that this growing tendency considerable affects the quality of relationships between people. As far as I am concerned, I believe that the drawbacks of the impact that these gadgets has on humans connections have the edge over its potential positive aspects. This essay will analyze the pluses and minuses accociated with these developments and provide a logical conclusion.
4.5
band
Nowadays social media addiction become trend discuss about causes and effects for this problem?
Over the last two or three decades, social media has revolutionised our communication as more comfortable and convenient as compared to the ancient times. Even though, at present people are being more addicted to utilising social media. Lack of confidence and abundance of spare time are the causes. This essay will discuss it briefly for the subsequent paragraphs.
6
band
Many people think that every individual is responsible for their own healthy lifestyle. Other believe that governments should take care of it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There is an opinion that humans should take care of their own health due to the fact they are accountable for their well-being. Supporters of the opposite view believe that the ministries ought to keep an eye on it. I concur with supporters of the opposite view for two reasons.
7
band
The speeding up of life in many areas such as travel and communication has negative effects on society at all levels—individual, national and global. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The lives of people such as myself who live in more developed parts of the world are certainly faster than they were. Many people in such situations complain about the negative effects of this. Whilst I can see there are negative effects, I think that they are minor when compared to the positive things the speeding up of life has brought about.
7
band
Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organized and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this?
It is often argued that it is crucial for individuals to be tidy in their workplace and in their house and everything should be organized in these places. I think it’s a correct belief and I advocate this opinion. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall explain my point of view.

You live near a university and would like to earn some extra money by renting a room in your apartment to a student.

Fully explain your ideas

These days, cell (mobile) phones and the internet are very important to the ways in which people relate to one another socially. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays social media addiction become trend discuss about causes and effects for this problem?

Many people think that every individual is responsible for their own healthy lifestyle. Other believe that governments should take care of it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The speeding up of life in many areas such as travel and communication has negative effects on society at all levels—individual, national and global. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organized and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this?