You live near a university and would like to earn some extra money by renting a room in your apartment to a student.

Dear Sir/ Madam, I would like to inform you that, I have a room available for renting in my

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which is affordable for students who like to save some money. The

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is 2 streets across the university and it comes with lots of facilities for the students. The room is fully furnished and the

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all the amenities which can

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be used by the tenant. The bathroom is attached and

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has a deck for viewing the amazing river view of Nile. Just below the

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is stores for daily needs and

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there is Bus facilities and other commutes to the university. The rent is very affordable for the Student who likes to save some money. Kindly contact me at 222-875-5264 and I look forward to hearing from you on my proposal to rent my room and seeking good students. Sincerely, Berry

Siji AnishMon Dec 21 2020

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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146 words

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