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In the future, there will be a higher proportion of older people than younger people. Is it positive or negative development?

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These days,
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ongevity of people is increasing due to advancement in health facilities
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 of which the number of senile people is
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it is entirely
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pessimistic in the following paragraphs. To commence with,
first
 and the foremost reason of
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ollowing trend is that the young generation is advance in technology and they have creative ideas to progress, whereas older generation is not able to catch up with
this
 revolution in the technological world. Young minds know have to deal with the odd situation if any, with their innovative ideas which older masses lack.
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experience in that realms
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for efficiency in every field, innovative is prefered these days. The
second
 most common reason is the unemployment in the modern world as there is saturation in job faculty for young ones. The older generation is healthy due to better medical immunities and eventually, there is an upsurge in their life span to work
therefore
 the young citizens are not availing job opportunities because older folks are still working in their respective
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. To conclude, senility is a good aspect of development in a country but in return
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youth is suffering in an awful way.
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