It is often said that the governments spend too much money on projects to protect wildlife, while there are other problems that are more important. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, some people argue that while too much

money

is spent on protecting

wildlife

, it would be better if the governments save

this

money

for other crucial issues. I personally agree with

this

statement and in

this

essay

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I will support my view with valid arguments and examples.

To begin

with,

although

it is still an undeniable fact that the government should allocate some

money

for protecting

wildlife

, there are many other important fields which deserve more funding.

This

is because many countries, especially developing ones, have too many issues which should be mitigated.

For example

, both the health care

system

and education

system

of these countries need financial support from the governments. To illustrate, unfortunately

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hundreds of citizens of most African countries die

everyday

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since they receive very rudimentary healthcare facilities.

Furthermore

, the poverty rate is drastically increasing which will lead to more critical problems

such

as increased crimes rate.

Consequently

, the governments should spend their

money

on trying to tackle these issues

instead

of spending it on

wildlife

protection.

For instance

, improving the education

system

and the healthcare

system

by building high-quality state-funded schools and public hospitals.

In contrast

, If the governments don’t allocate

money

to help overcome these problems, their citizens will not gain any benefit from protecting

the

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wildlife

. In conclusion, projects which aim to protect

wildlife

might be of some importance,

however

basic public services

such

as education and healthcare are more significant. So I believe that

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governments should spend more

money

on solving problems related to these fields.