Some people believe that money is the most important factor for achieving happiness. However, others believe that happiness has nothing to do with money. Do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion and examples. Write at least 250 words.

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section

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of people

think

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that

finacial

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financial

strnegth

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strength

is the most crucial indicator

for

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to

of

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obtain

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satisfaction. whereas, another section

argue

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that

finacial

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financial

status does not reflect how bliss they are. In my opinion, happiness is not related to financial status. In

this

essay, I will

exaplin

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explain

with supporting points to strengthen my view.

Primarly

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Primary

Primarily

, financial

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staus

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status

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is a relative thing. Person's

econimical

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economical

economic

status is decided with according to

s

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the

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urrounding environment.

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, two to three decades before most of the people in India are without any phone, only

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a

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ew

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of people used to have

l

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and phone connection. Now, each and every person in the family

are

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having

atleast

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at least

a cell phone connection. On top of

this

, we are upgrading phones on regular basis and not

satified

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satisfied

. Secondarily,

peacefullness

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peacefulness

is an internal feeling. When people stay with their family,

frinds

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friends

or loved ones they feel happy.

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, in recent times all children who are graduating from colleges are moving and settling different parts of the world, by leaving their parents and

childwood

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childhood

friends.

Eventhough

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Even though

, they are earning good amount salaries at these positions, they are feeling loneliness and depression because they are missing their

leved

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loved

lived

ones.

Thirdly

, staying with family increase add

s

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mile to face. When you are with your family it does not matter where you are and what you are eating.

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, in

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the

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ecent

news paper

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newspaper

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, small

artical

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article

has been written about a family, who are enjoying

there

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their

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meal together. In conclusion, I strongly support the view that for

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conomy

of

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apply

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do not affect happiness.