Some people think that mobile phones are harmful for children while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Nowadays, mobile phones are the easiest medium for communication and it

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provides many facilities which are used by people on the daily basis. While

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it has harmful and negative impacts on children who use mobile phones.

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some people

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with the statement.

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essay will analyse both sides of the argument before arriving at a reasoned conclusion.

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, due to technological advancement

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children

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are more addictive to mobile phones and it leads to

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armful activity which sometimes put their life into danger.

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, a very dangerous game of dare, released on google

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, which was played by children and leads to criminal activities because dare in the game suggests to kill other people and sometimes the task was to do suicide and complete the dare.

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kind of game played by children on their

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will ruin their life.

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, the radiation which

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coming from mobile phones are harmful

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eyes and if child

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xcessive electronic device it will mentally disturb them and cause psychotic disease.

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, some people believe that using mobile phones is not a dangerous activity for children, because at present every

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want their child to be tech-savvy and they personally give them knowledge about every new

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, due to digitalisation school nowadays give their education on mobile phones and children from home learn their courses

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will saves their time but it has bad consequences in the future.

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pread of coronavirus,

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hole nation had declared lockdown, all school and colleges are

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closed,

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universities started their lecture online and now students can learn from anywhere without missing their academic year. In conclusion, there is no denying that

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our lives

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easier in every way but, it is evident that it has

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dverse effect on

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lives. Their loved ones should give them less access to

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kind of electronic device because

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are not known with

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future consequences.