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In many countries, fast food is becoming cheaper and more widely available. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

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In many nations, the consumption of junk
food
 has exponentially increased because of its reasonable price and availability. Despite its benefits in saving
time
 and money, I believe that they are eclipsed by its devastating effects on health and the environment. Admittedly, the affordability of processed
food
 saves people's
time
 and their pocket money. owing to the fast-paced lives people
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 now, they have to work for extra hours.
As a result
, they do not have
time
 to prepare homemade meals. Even if they have more
time
, they prefer relaxing to cooking. Thanks to low expenses while purchasing fast
food
 in compassion to a cooked meal, junk
food
 has become the main choice for many people. In spite of the mentioned merits, the detrimental outcomes of consuming fast
food
 should not be neglected. One of the major negative effects is the harmful long-term impact on health. Since those processed meals contain huge amounts of fats and carbohydrates, consumers usually suffer from severe diseases
such
 as obesity and cardiovascular disorders. Which aggravates the condition is that If they continue to ingest high quantities of junk
food
, they would show a decline in their performance at work. Another possible devastating impact is that processed
food
 is considered unfriendly to the environment. The more the consumption of fast
food
 is, the more non-degradable waste is produced.
This
 is because of either the excessive packaging to keep the
food
 hot or the use of plastic culinary tools while eating. To conclude,
although
 fast
food
 might save people's
time
 and pocket money, it not only decreases consumers' agility, due to being overweight but
also
 harms the environment by its non-recyclable waste
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • widespread availability
  • accessibility
  • nutritional value
  • health implications
  • obesity
  • heart disease
  • traditional cooking
  • local cuisines
  • plastic waste
  • environmental impact
  • employment opportunities
  • economic boost
  • time-saving
  • convenience
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