BThe diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

BThe diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates a wave-energy machine with its design and its location. In the terms of its mechanism, the wave helps the water level rise from the bottom of the machine which increases the air pressure inside the 1st chamber.
This
leads to a gradual increase in the airflow, leading to the rotation of the turbine. The excess escapes the 2nd chamber and the pressure in both chambers resets.
On the other hand
, there are 2 options for the location. the first is near the shore which generates low outputs because of the small waves.
This
installation costs less than the counterpart. the other is a bit into the sea which is just the opposite of the nearshore installation as though
this
costs more, a large output is generated because of the large waves
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.
To conclude
, the wave-energy machine requires air pressure
along with
the obvious which is a wave. there are 2 locations where the machines can be placed but the one which is far from the coast benefits
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more than the near one.
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