Write a letter to your landlord to fix the issues in your house

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you regarding issues in our
house
that need to be resolved. Starting our
move in
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date we have experienced many problems. The shower in the bathroom is constantly leaking. Unfortunately, it is hard to sleep at night and impossible to have a bath. Another concern that I would like to bring to your attention is the broken fence. We live on
the
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busy street, people pass our
house
on a regular basis. I would like to feel safe at my own
house
, especially
consedering
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considering
that we have paid the full rent and deposit on time. As per our agreement, four tenants suppose to occupy the entire
house
and currently there are only three of us. As I am a
full time
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student it is extremely hard to afford the rent. If you can not
fulfill
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this
request, at least allow us to post an advertisement online and find a roommate. Please, help us to schedule a maintenance person to come. As well as your decision or progress on searching
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new tenant. Sincerely, Jane Atkinson
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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