In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

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Each culture in the world are very unique and to be treated equally. In some society, they teach their offsprings to
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hard or to try hard to attain new heights.
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kind of attitude is very much important for one's success. In my opinion, there are many advantages in
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comparing to negligible disadvantage.
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of all, to succeed in any field we need to
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hard for it.
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, consider a post-graduate in science gets a job in supply chain field, Though he won't have any basic knowledge about the field, he will still attain success out of repeated trial and errors. If you keep doing the same thing again and again you can attain it. As per many cultures or many religions in the world,there is nothing which cannot be achieved.
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, consider learning the toughest language
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as Chinese or Arabic. Constant training to learn it will make us speak that language one day.
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, some people feel that in spite of all the hard
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they cannot get a certain thing. Here, I feel that though they wish for something but lack of perseverance and hard
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make them fail miserably. In my point of view, a thing which was done without concentration and hard
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is a complete waste of time.
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,
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,we
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hard we cannot achieve unrealistic tasks
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as taking all the water out from the sea or turning clouds into some other colour.
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of wasting time on something where we don't have interest we could divert our attention on other things. In the name of hard
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,we cannot lose our precious time on something which is not happening. To conclude my argument, our goals should be realistic and achievable. Hard
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with
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goals is what all the cultures though us.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • achieve
  • try hard
  • positive mindset
  • self-belief
  • motivates
  • ambitious goals
  • resilience
  • determination
  • confidence
  • self-esteem
  • growth mindset
  • unrealistic expectations
  • disappointment
  • failure
  • effort
  • hard work
  • seek support
  • individual differences
  • abilities
  • capabilities
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