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I hope you are well and doing great. It’s been long since your
last
letter. So, I have thought of writing
this
letter about the
book
I have read recently. I want to inform you about
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ery inspiring
book
which I would like you to recommend. I am sure you will like
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oo and it will help you achieve your goal. The
book
“The secret” is
self- help
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book
by Rhonda Byrne that explains how the law of attraction, which states that positive energy attracts positive things into one’s life, I think you should use it too, though I have tried myself personally using
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aw of attraction formula and achieved my success too.
This
book
helps you
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how you can use the power of positive thinking to achieve anything you imagine. You can use positivity of the books which
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talks about
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aw of attraction formula which you can apply for your upcoming exam to succeed. You can buy
this
book
from
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online
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stores or you can visit
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earest mall at
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me of
this
letter and take care of your own.
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