Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
The indefinite article, an, may be redundant when used with the uncountable noun life in your sentence. Consider removing it.
It appears that an article is missing before the word time. Consider adding the article.
It appears that the verb making should be in the past participle form. Consider changing it.
The singular countable noun club follows the quantifier lot, which requires a plural noun. Consider using a plural noun or a different quantifier.
The plural verb do does not appear to agree with the singular subject the other person. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.
This sentence appears to be missing a pronoun. Consider adding the pronoun.
It appears that you have an unnecessary comma after the subordinating conjunction Because. Consider removing the comma.
It appears that the verb lied should be in the base form as part of the to-infinitive following want. Consider changing the verb form.
It appears that the form of the verb relax does not work with be in this sentence.
It appears that the noun sport is being used as an adjective, but you may have chosen incorrectly between the singular and plural form. Consider changing the noun form.
The indefinite article an may not be required with the plural noun works in this sentence. Consider removing the article, or changing the noun to singular.
The noun phrase force seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
It appears that your sentence or clause uses an incorrect form of the verb force. Consider changing it.
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Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.
If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.
Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:
...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?