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The world is heavily dependent on oil for energy, which is unsustainable due to global warming. What future resource do you think will take oil’s place? Why do you think this?

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One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is the colossal upsurge in fuel consumption . There is a widespread worry that
this
 will lead to a myriad of concerns on the planet.
This
 essay will discuss the other resources
instead
 of oil with my opinion using a pragmatic approach. To commence with, there are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one not only includes bad weather but
also
 includes heatwaves and more hot summers. According to the research conducted by Western Sydney University, more than 90 per cent of the participants acknowledged the problems showered by global warming .
Secondly
, other key aspects related to the energy resources are gases and coal engine.
On the other hand
, the disadvantages of the above-mentioned idea are not limited to one thing but
also
 includes other things.
For instance
, a survey conducted by the government of Australia reveals that the negative impacts of global warming are considerable and should never be underestimated and ignored.
Lastly
, in my opinion, the government of Australia is taking a great initiative an education its citizens against the negative impacts.
Moreover
, Citizens are being encouraged to follow the applicable laws as well as rules and regulations to promote prosperity, productivity, efficiency and positive environment in the world. In my view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that despite having some drawbacks, the benefits of the world are indeed too dire to ignore.
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