some people think that when a person travels into different culture they should adapt to the local practices and customs.to what extent do you agree?
It is often argued by some individuals, that people should be adapting to local traditions and cultures
,
when they move to a Remove the comma
apply
country
with counter customs.Use synonyms
This
essay disagrees with Linking Words
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the
above mentioned
point of view.These efforts to fit in someone else's culture are not only detrimental to one's religious rituals but Add a hyphen
above-mentioned
also
can prove very uncomfortable in certain situations.
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First
and foremost, many individuals tend to follow the traditions of a specific destination they are visiting.Linking Words
However
, they should only Linking Words
adapt
those practices as it suits them and not overdo them.Blindly following another Correct your spelling
adopt
country
's traditions will only make them forget about their own local practises, Use synonyms
in addition
to Linking Words
this
, some people can end up following traditions that might harm their own belief system.Linking Words
For instance
, it can be harmful Linking Words
for
the religious beliefs of a Muslim if he visits another Change the preposition
to
country
and blindly follows other religious traditions just to fit in.
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Secondly
, it can become quite uncomfortable for certain people, if they try to fit into another state's customs that they normally do not follow in their own countries.Take clothing habits Linking Words
for example
, for women in Linking Words
india
, who are used to wearing sarees all the time, it can turn out to be very Change the capitalization
India
problemetic
, if they tried to wear something else in another Correct your spelling
problematic
country
just to get involved with the local culture.Use synonyms
Hence
they Linking Words
wont
feel confident enough and might not want to visit that place again.Add an apostrophe
won't
Similarly
, they Linking Words
wont
be able to enjoy the whole experience of travelling as well.
In a nutshell, I think, that people who argue that we should adapt to the local Add an apostrophe
won't
practises
when we visit another Change the verb form
practise
country
, are fairly wrong.Because, Use synonyms
this
not only will turn out to be very difficult and out of their comfort zone, but Linking Words
also
can cause problems when it comes to one's faith and beliefs.People should follow the traditions as it suits them, not just to fit in.Linking Words
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