some people think that when a person travels into different culture they should adapt to the local practices and customs.to what extent do you agree?

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It is often argued by some individuals, that people should be adapting to local traditions and cultures
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when they move to a
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with counter customs.
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point of view.These efforts to fit in someone else's culture are not only detrimental to one's religious rituals but
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can prove very uncomfortable in certain situations.
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and foremost, many individuals tend to follow the traditions of a specific destination they are visiting.
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, they should only
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those practices as it suits them and not overdo them.Blindly following another
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's traditions will only make them forget about their own local practises,
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to
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, some people can end up following traditions that might harm their own belief system.
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, it can be harmful
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the religious beliefs of a Muslim if he visits another
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and blindly follows other religious traditions just to fit in.
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, it can become quite uncomfortable for certain people, if they try to fit into another state's customs that they normally do not follow in their own countries.Take clothing habits
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, for women in
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, who are used to wearing sarees all the time, it can turn out to be very
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just to get involved with the local culture.
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feel confident enough and might not want to visit that place again.
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be able to enjoy the whole experience of travelling as well. In a nutshell, I think, that people who argue that we should adapt to the local
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when we visit another
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, are fairly wrong.Because,
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not only will turn out to be very difficult and out of their comfort zone, but
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can cause problems when it comes to one's faith and beliefs.People should follow the traditions as it suits them, not just to fit in.
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