Young people these days tend to be less polite and respectful than in the past. Discuss the causes and give solutions.

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unior person is not well mannered and solicitous
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ack of civil manner which is not found in present youth.
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, manners should be taught by their guardians. In
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we will discuss the cause and solutions why
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oungster is not amicable and reverent.
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, in the upcoming period young people think they are independent they know how to live with their own, As, they don't like to live in restriction which is the main cause of lacking well-mannered behaviour.
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, juniors are trying to live their own without boundaries and without their ancestor. They got no education through schools because they do not concentrate which things are taught by their teachers. Most of the time if someone tries to teach them they got the direct answer to "mind their own business or not to direct them".
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, manner should be taught by their parents and teachers. Boundaries should be set for
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oungster, they always got reminders from their elders to be respectful and civil with others.
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, when a child is on their developing stage from that time training should start with children, So, with their developing stages
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they got to know their norms which is necessary for everyone. In conclusion, at
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is the fault of their parents to fully allow their child to be independent and do not set a limit. For the solution we should train are upcoming generations to be polite and respectful.
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