Some people think that mobile phones are harmful for children, while others disagree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is often argued by some that mobile phones are detrimental to children, while others think it is not.
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provide evidence that in some cases, smartphones help a lot and are more beneficial than its negatives.
On the one hand, lack of physical activity and poor grades are the root causes of excessive usage of mobiles. To explain it briefly, these days, most of the children are preferred to play indoors and glued to Linking Words
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affects their studies. To illustrate, the recent survey conducted by Linking Words
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proved that the children who spend their majority of Use synonyms
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on social networking could not get desire scores in their academics.
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, despite having the aforementioned disadvantageous, fortunately, mobile phones help in several ways. In case of emergency, Linking Words
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, when parents are not available at home, a child can contact them to describe the situation of their grandparent's health. Linking Words
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have the feature to find out the geographical location, By using Linking Words
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provides security and in case of emergencies, it is a better facility which should be provided by parents to their children. Linking Words
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