Some parents says that giving expensive gift to a child can create bad habits in him/her. Do you agree or disagree? give your opinion and include any relevant examples from your experience?

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eceiver. A certain segment of the society believes that bad habits indulge character of a child when they get an expensive

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by their parents. While

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others perception is that

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trend has detrimental effects on the habits of children. I disagree with

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ater opinion. I would like to explicate about it into the upcoming paragraphs.

To begin

with, there are myriad negative effects on children's behaviour when they receive that

gift

which has a high amount in the market by their parents.

First

and the foremost disadvantage is that offspring are not only realised the actual value of money and do not do the value of their precious time. They become a couch potato and lethargic children would not like to do hard work to achieve their precious gifts by self. they would be totally dependent on their parents rather than to do

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etter study or to do hard work. so that they buy an expensive

gift

by self.

Thus

,giving an expensive

gift

to adolescence can distract them from their goals.

Moreover

, another bad impact of the expensive

gift

on children is that they disturb the peace of the house.

for example

, if a child sees an advertisement on television about any object

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they insist their parents buy that thing for them.

However

, when parents do not fulfil their requirements in their children do misbehaves with their parents they started to fight with them. Apart from it, time is not constant it changes

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For example

, in old age parents cannot give an expensive

gift

to their children that time children choose

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rong path they take initiative to do

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rime, robbing so on which rain their remaining life. Eventually, bad habits make for childlike a wild animal. To conclude, excess of anything

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bad outcomes.

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parents make happy to their children by giving

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expensive gifts that have some advantages yet, it's disadvantages outweigh its an advantage