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Nowadays a few people take their family with them to abroad whenever they go for a business trip. What are the advantages and disadvantages on them and on their family

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In the modern era, it has become a trend for people going abroad on
business
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 trips often take their families along with them.
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 it has positive implications, the few drawbacks resulting from the same cannot be overlooked. Let us delve deeper into both the school of thoughts to have better clarity in the subsequent paragraphs.
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 with, there are multifarious benefits associated
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 taking
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amily on
business
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 trips.
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 and foremost,
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business
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 trips help to build great bonding between couples and children who gets quality time to spend at a new place. To explain, these work trips at altogether provides space and time to engage in important family events like birthdays and anniversaries which is often monotonous in daily life.
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 Sigmund Freud, an eminent psychologist in his study of human behaviour and cognitive skills stated families going on
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 trips had stronger as well positive relationships as they got
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reat amount of quality time to spend and understand each other nicely.
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, children travelling on
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 trips with their parents get the opportunities to learn and understand various cultures of foreign countries. To elaborate, even though children get to study about different countries and cultures via books, travelling on
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 trips along with their parents pave ways to learn and experience the cultures, arts, architects and history of various countries across the globe. As per the recent survey conducted by Oxford University, in 2017, in
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K over 5500 international students revealed that 80% of them easily got accustomed to the UK culture and did not
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 any
home sickness
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 as well, just because they had travelled on
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 trips with their families occasionally.
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, though there are positive implications for families travelling abroad for
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 trips, the negative aspects of
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 travelling cannot be ignored as well. Primarily, the families travelling on
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 trips seldom get into trouble because of the new atmosphere, culture and language. To explicate, there are situations where families face cultural shocks and linguistic barriers as they find it difficult to accept
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 culture all of a sudden and cannot communicate in the local language used in that particular foreign country. To cite an example, as per the survey conducted in 2016, in Vietnam by the Global Culture Survey on local 10,000 Vietnamese women revealed that 95% of them struggled and faced cultural shocks when they travelled abroad with their husbands on
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 trips.
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, one major factor that really affects the people travelling abroad on
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 trips with their families is that the
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 motive of travelling on
business
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 trip gets hit. To amplify, there
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 been situations where a person's concentration and focus on his
business
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 assignments decreases because of responsibilities of
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amily he has to take care of while on a
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 trip. To exemplify,
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 Benjamin Bradlee, the editor in chief of The Washington Post, in his article in 2013 stated that 75% of
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 trips proved to be unsuccessful as the working professionals took their families along with them. To encapsulate it can be concluded that
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 there are benefits of taking families abroad on a
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 trip, the negative implications are still hard to get rid of. It can be said that it is almost equally balanced because it
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 depends on the person to person what they prefer.
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