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All over the world, societies are facing a growing problems with obesity. This problem effect to the children and adults. What are the reasons for this? and how could it be tackle.

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In the modern era's overweight problems are increasing day by day and creating more health issues in adults and children around the world. Its is happening due to multiple reasons like people are unaware of
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esults of avoiding healthy meal. In
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To begin
 with, the main reason for the increased obesity among the population is due to the sedentary lifestyle, it is followed by most of
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eople due to fast-paced life with advanced technology, they are ignored physical task and use lifts at the place of stairs.
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 due to lack of exercise, the body gains excess weight in the long run leading to another severe health disease.
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, even most people prefer driving
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ar for short distance due to their tedious routine, many of them hardly find the time for gym and outdoor activities.
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, both parents are working, they have not much time to prepare a home food for their children, thereby, they allowed their children to eat outside,
this
 continuous process makes children habitual, they always opt fast cuisine even the homemade feed is available. On the other side, initiatives should be taken by the government, they should increase
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ax on unhealthy foods,
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 the people consume it less,
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, do campaigns to educate people about the consequences of obesity. To conclude,
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overnment must make a team which promote the advantages of fitness and aware all age people from unhealthy food, they might be controlled the population those are become used to of junk cuisine.
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